Ex. E

 


From first glance, the font seems to be very hard to read as it has heavy stroke.

The  typography also have very small kerning  for the letters "L" and "A" next to each other have very small 

The leading is also very small, and the small spaces between each rows of words make the text seem very suffocated.

The alignment is also off as the text is centered.

I would also think that the tracking needs to be increased.

I would remove the stroke to improve readability.

The spaces between letters "L" and "A" aka the kerning need to be bigger.

I would also increase leading.

The text should be aligned to the left.


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